55 Fiction - The Confused Question
This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 57; the fifty-seventh edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with Madhu Vajpayee, the author of Seeking Redemption and Shades Publications, the publisher of Friendship- Bonds Beyond Time.
Hands are on the edge of the rock. Downside is hollow with lush greenery. The moisture on the hands led to slippery and Rohan is in air now. Help! Help! Shouted Rohan. Hold My Hand responded a Monster from Nowhere. Where are we going now? asked Rohan. Depends on all your sins answered the Monster.
Short and crisp. The monster lending a hand is slightly scary :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Salvwi for your read. Yes sometimes to go with the topic these kind of scary sides need to be introduced.
DeleteAh! Short and Meaningful. All the best for BAT! Keep writing :) Happy Diwali!
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Thank You much! Welcome to my blog. Wishing you the prosperous diwali too.
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DeleteThank You Sarvana for reminding. I have sent the email to you.
DeleteYeah. If there are more sins that we have to answer for, then a lift from a devil seems likely. Though the slippery rock might just have been his bad luck too. :) Who knows...
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinay for your valuable comments. That's what the Customs and Culture says that if you do more sins the route will be towards Hell or else en route to Heavens. And so the saying like your previous birth sins affected you that we called as Karma.
Deletethat's scary and intriguing
ReplyDeleteHappy Diwali, My Blogaton entry Hold My Hand
Thank You Cifar. Hope you liked my post. Wishing you the same!
DeleteHmm..inner monster indeed!
ReplyDeleteThank You aativas.
DeleteYour 55 words hold much more power. human mind indeed is a monster & one never knows where it will lead one.
ReplyDeleteTrue. Yes though we are advancing in technology but still the human mind is using this technology for the devilish purposes. Thank you for the read.
DeleteArey ah naluguru movie lo manam manchi cheste gods kanipistaru sins cheste dayyalu kanipistaru...mi rohan hell ki veltunnadu anamata--- Anand Kumar vamsi
ReplyDeleteHa ha..Yh logical ga we know that he is going to hell but to confuse the audience I should have replace the Monster with any other Synonym. Monster ane word valla most of the readers believe in Hell rather than Heaven. ..:)
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